Winning THRILLER 1st Scene Script – BUNNYMAN BRIDGE, by Colin K Stewart

 

Genre: Thriller, Crime, Mystery

After the tragic loss of her husband in a line of duty shooting, Detective Joan Fortune collapses and loses their unborn child. In the ensuing weeks, Joan’s life begins to crumble around her as she desperately tries to find the drug lords responsible for her husband’s murder. Things change for Joan when a local priest brings in a three year old girl who was left abandoned at his church. Joan’s heart melts upon meeting her.

CAST LIST:

Narrator: Elizabeth Rose Morriss
Gage: Connor Lyon
Ed: Dan Cristofori
Mike: Shaun Mazoka
Todd:: Brennan Clost
Mrs Zachary: Julie C. Sheppard
Joan: Rachel Rain Packota

Get to know the writer:

 What is your screenplay about?

It’s a supernatural story about a malevolent spirit reliving its past to reclaim its family..

What genres does your screenplay fall under?

Supernatural horror…

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

The book written by, Ronald J. Van Wynsberg, is an awesome read… If done right, I think it could rival with other cult classics like ‘Halloween’ or ‘Friday the 13th’… It has all the elements of a supernatural horror with an ending no one sees coming.

How would you describe this script in two words?

Movie worthy…

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Halloween…

How long have you been working on this screenplay?

6 months…

How many stories have you written?

To many to count…but several that have made their way into producer’s hands…

What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the most times in your life?)

I am a fan of Country Music… If I had to pick one…’Wide Open Spaces’ by the Dixie Chicks

What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

Time…

Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

Golf…

You entered your screenplay via FilmFreeway. What has been your experiences working with the submission platform site?

User-friendly website; Professional…

What influenced you to enter the festival? What were your feelings on the initial feedback you received?

The fact that the festival was looking for the genre to which I absolutely love… Very excited…

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

KIDNAPPING Stories from the FEEDBACK Film & Writing Festival

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Watch the best of KIDNAPPING Stories, Screenplays, and Short Film Moderation videos from the festival.


festival posterWRONG PLACE, WRONG CRIME
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Germany, Crime


festival posterMOUSSE
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Sweden, Drama

ACTORFEATURE SCRIPT – FEATURE: FLEET WEEK: EVANESCENCE
December 2014 Reading
Written by David Redstone

ACTOR1ST SCENE SCRIPT – THE HAKU
September 2014 Reading
Written by Gina Surles

ACTOR1ST SCENE SCRIPT – FOR THE LOVE OF PETE
July 2014 Reading
Written by David Kurtz

ACTOR1ST SCENE SCRIPT – JACK’S MERMAID
July 2014 Reading
Written by Lois Wickstrom

ACTOR1ST SCENE SCRIPT – EAGLES
March 2014 Reading
Written by David Jack Smith

ACTOR1ST SCENE SCRIPT – OF THEIR OWN ACCORD
March 2014 Reading
Written by Justuce Heninger

ACTOR1ST SCENE SCRIPT – THE DARKNESS OF THE MOOR
March 2014 Reading
Written by James Everett


festival posterHOW (NOT) TO ROB A TRAIN
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4min, Comedy/Adventure, Canada

Climactic Scene – DIETRICH DANZIG
February 2015 Reading
Written by John Pisano-Thomsen

FIRST SCENE: DIETRICH DANZIG
January 2015 Reading
Written by John Pisano-Thomsen

ACTORChapter 2 NOVEL Reading: CORR SYL THE TERRIBLE
July 2015 Reading
Written by Garry Rogers

ACTORFEATURE SCRIPT – Yellow Touch Red, You’re Dead
November 2015 Reading
Written by Lauren Hoekstra

ACTORJACK SPADE: DREAM DETECTIVE Video Pitch
Novel
Written by Carl A. Chase

ACTORSHORT SCRIPT – WALK WITH THE DEVIL
June 2015 Reading
Written by Alison C. Hall

SCREENPLAY1st Scene Script: REDNECK CHRISTMAS
August 2015 Reading
by JC Mercer Jr.

1st Scene SCRIPT – TETON RECKONING
December 2015 Reading
Written by Debi Yazbeck

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GORE Stories from the Writing Festival

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festival posterFAMILIAR
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Horror, Canada

ACTORWATCH – HANNIBAL TV Show Spec
April 2014 Reading
by Ibba Armancas

ACTORSHORT STORY READING – THE BABYSITTER
July 2014 Reading
Written by Sean Hood


festival poster1500 NINOS
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2015
6min, Horror/Mystery, Canada

SCREENPLAYChapter 1 Novel: WHAT IF ITS ALL BEEN A LIE
August 2015 Reading
by Nancy Arant Williams


festival posterMINOTAUR
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2015
5min, Greece, Experimental/Fantasy

SCREENPLAYChapter 6 Novel: STAY AWHILE
June 2015 Reading
Written by Anthony Vecchiarello

ACTORTV PILOT Reading of HAUNTED HEART
August 2015 Reading
Written by Robert Herold

ACTOR1st Chapter: THE SZGANY CHRONICLES
May 2015 Reading
Written by David John Roberts III

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Deadline December 5th: First Scene Screenplay Festival Contest

Deadline: FIRST SCENE (first 10pgs) SCREENPLAY FESTIVAL Get script performed at the festival. Full feedback

CLICK to Submit:
http://www.wildsound.ca/firstscenescreenplaycontest.html

– Submit the first stages of your film, get it performed at the festival, and get full feedback!

WATCH past 1st Scene Festival readings:

Watch the December 2015 Winning 1st Scene Readings:

1st Scene SCRIPT – GIVE ME A REASON
December 2015 Reading
Written by Theresa Drew
http://www.wildsoundfestival.com/give_me_a_reason.html

1st Scene SCRIPT – TETON RECKONING
December 2015 Reading
Written by Debi Yazbeck
http://www.wildsoundfestival.com/teton_reckoning.html

1st Scene SCRIPT – LOVELESS
December 2015 Reading
Written by Chris Courtney Martin
http://www.wildsoundfestival.com/loveless.html

Watch 1st Scene Table Read of the Thriller Script “The Other Side”

Watch THE OTHER SIDE, by Barb Markusa

SYNOPSIS:

What could possibly go wrong when four of New York City’s finest rip off a Cuban drug dealer? More than they bargained for when the drug dealer and his not so bright sidekick seek revenge. What ensues next is a cross country chase full of action, chaos and comedy leading to a surprise ending.

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Judy Thrush
BRIAN – David Poon
JESSE – Andy Bridge
EVAN – Gene Abella
EDDIE – Clinton Pontes
KELLY – Anjelica Alejandro

 

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Deadline November 30th for Thriller/Suspense Film and Writing Festival: https://thrillersuspensefestival.com/

Watch Thriller 1st Scene Script Reading: THE CURSE OF SAM HAIN

Deadline October 20th for Thriller/Suspense Film and Writing Festival
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Watch 1st Scene Script Reading of THE CURSE OF SAM HAIN:

SYNOPSIS:

The long survivor of a crash landing on a distant world becomes the surprising savior to the aborigines facing genocide.

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Frances Townend
Belenus – Sean Ballantyne
Sam Hain- Neil Kulin
Daughter – Julia Vally
Rider – Kaleb Alexander
Wife – Jacqueline Brown
Man #1 – Charles Gordon
Man #1 – Rob Salerno

Watch Thriller SHORT STORY READING – STRANGE THINGS HAPPEN IN NEVADA

STRANGE THINGS HAPPEN IN NEVADA, by Katarzyna Kochany
Short Story Reading:

STORY Read By – Andrew Farr

Short story genre: Family, Adventure, Coming-of-Age, Fantasy, Western

SYNOPSIS:

A father-son road trip from Idaho to Nevada leads to strange encounters with a Shoshone Indian legend..

Get to know writer Katarzyna Kochany:
http://www.wildsoundfestival.com/katarzyna_kochany.html

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Deadline: SHORT STORY Festival. Get your story performed at the Writing Festival. FULL FEEDBACK on all entries.
http://www.wildsound.ca/short_story_contest.html

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Watch Thriller Feature Screenplay Reading of SHOOTING STAR

Deadline to Submit your THRILLER/SUSPENCE Screenplay to the Festival:
http://www.thrillersuspencefestival.com

WATCH – SHOOTING STAR, Feature Script Reading by Richard Harrison:

SYNOPSIS:

When the love of your life has the keys to your heart and the keys to your money, it’s hard to kill her!

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Becky Shrimpton
KELLY – Andrew Farr
QUAID – Dan Cristofori
CASSIDY – Shailene Garnett
CRAWLEY – Lucas James
RON PICKMAN JR. – Rob Stone
VARIOUS ROLES – Anjelica Alejandro

Get to know writer Richard Harrison:

1. What is your FEATURE SCRIPT about?

Shooting’ Star’ is a ‘rock n roll’ road movie, a story of love and revenge. A beautiful, young female grifter, realises the the guy she’s in love with is more committed to their lifestyle than her, and in desperation steals the only thing he has of value that could be her chance of security ( the key to a safe deposit box) and leaves him. We start the film three after this event with her ex-boyfriend, Kelly, hunting her down across New Mexico for the key. The obvious motive is ‘money’ but its really about ‘love’ and recapturing that one moment you had in you life with someone you love.

2. Why should your script be made into a film?

This script should definitely be made into a movie because its an hour and forty minutes of pure escapism! Its got heart, its got desire, it will make you cry and it will make you laugh. It makes you lose yourself for that moment in time, which is what a great film is about.

3. How long have you been writing screenplays?

If I am honest, about fifteen or sixteen years. Its been a long, long road, and its very hard to get recognised. So, to be selected as one of your winners is a great compliment. As a very experienced Editor, friend of mine said, “filmmaking is not a science. There’s no exact way. There’s no definition, no precise formula”.

4. What movie have you seen the most in your life?

That’s easy, The Big Lebowski, followed by Some Like it Hot and then Casablanca. I remember dragging both my kid brothers to see The Big Lebowski when they were about fourteen and thirteen years old, there were seven of us in the cinema at the most. When they came out they said they had never seen a movie like it. It must have been some four or five years later when it started to catch on, and and over the last fifteen years we have watched with a sense of irony, joy and wonder at how its caught on and got recognised. If you re-watch certain scenes, there are more and more jokes in there than most people recognise and more than most films, literally dozens of them. Its a masterpiece! But having said that, what’s the screenplay of Casablanca? Eighty pages max on the paper, no fat on the bone there and possibly the most perfect script ever written, “Where were you at 3 O’clock this morning?” “That’s so long ago I can’t remember”. That’s a line and they come at you every minute. Watch it again!!

5. What artists would you love to work with?

Its certainly changed. For most of the 90’s its been the same as most people , Tarantino, Rodriguez, and then gradually I graduated to Alexander Payne, who is a true, true filmmaker of the highest order. But most recently David O’Russell. Those three films over the last few years have been incredible. To go from ‘The Fighter’ to ‘Silver Linings Playbook’ to ‘American’ Hustle’ in today’s climate is not only incredible bravado, it really is a true artist that can entertain an audience with three films that are essentially all character driven, its rare, its a hark back to the old greats such as Billy Wilder and Alexander Mckendrick. On an acting front, they blow in the wind, which isn’t their fault, its mainly down the films. But Christian Bale has prevailed, Ryan Gosling never disappoints, but I think there’s more exciting women actors out there than ever before, dozens of them with so much to give, and I am not talking the young babes, look at Robin Wright, Gillian Anderson on stage here in the UK, Helen Mirren, Meryl Streep still knocks them dead and if she got her act together, Sharon Stone could knock them all out the park……women actors are a power to be unleashed in the cinema and I think their time is coming!

6. How many stories/screenplays have you written?

‘Shooting Star’ is my fourth feature length screenplay and I wrote, directed and produced one, award winning, short film, ‘Sweet Thing’. My third feature film script, ‘THE HONEY KILLER’, I wrote, produced, and directed on a shoestring budget and won three international film festivals, and I had it called ‘a cult movie’ by Warner Bros, but I could never find a Distributor. I’ve seen it screened and succeed in over half a dozen countries at film festivals, but no international audience has ever seen it: http://www.thehoneykiller.com, http://www.razorfilms.co.uk. I would love to get it out there! Again, like ‘Shooting Star’, its essentially a road movie with a femme fatale as its lead.

7. Ideally, where would you like to be in 5 years?

That’s easy, Hollywood, and Directing my next movie, which is already written and ready to go.

8. Describe your process; do you have a set routine, method for writing?

Its a little unusual: I usually think of really outrageous and provocative scenes and scenarios. Then, when I have three or four really unusual scenes that excite me, I start thinking, ‘who is in them and what is their motive’. So, I invent set-pieces that really stand out, then invent my characters and storyline, so kind of back to front. Or the other way is I invent a really good opening scene, then think to myself, ‘where the hell would this go?’ And I find that really exciting as I don’t know where the script is going to go. I make it up as I go along and surprise myself til I get to the end. From that i surprise others.

9. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

This will bore everyone reading this but mainly exercise; running, working out, cardiovascular, yoga, keeping fit. If I feel good exercising, I can generally achieve more creatively, but that’s just me! A bottle of brandy might work for others, but I have also written some of my best stuff sunk into a bottle of red wine….’hypocrite!’

10. What influenced you to enter the Thriller Script Contest?

I think what influenced me the most was the full appraisal of my what I had written. None of us know what we’ve written, we think we do but we don’t, no idea, we’re clueless. We’re just sunk in our own vision, and when I saw the full appraisal as part of the competition, I was sold. Then, I got my appraisal and it was possibly the best I have ever received, not because it was good or complimentary, but because they had obviously read it, and I mean completely and they properly criticised it! So their comments were not only ‘left of field’, but they were an accurate observation and they actually improved the script, not matter how hard they were to swallow. It was so worthwhile it was worth the price of entry just to get that feed back…..let alone winning, that was a real surprise. Winning didn’t even cross my mind, I needed to know’ what professional people thought of it. Me and the guy who I created the story with, Dave Powell, are over the moon.

11. Any advice or tips you’d like to pass on to other writers?

Yeah, of course! You haven’t nailed it, re-write, re-write and re-write it. Get advice and comments from others, disregard the ones you know are nonsense, assess the one’s that annoy you, react quickly to the ones that make sense! Only you know where this screenplay is going, but make it the best it can be, no matter what it takes, because at the end of the day you wrote it…..but the outside voices and comments could be the ones to make your day.

Watch Thriller Feature Screenplay Reading of THE DEVIL’S LARCENY

Deadline July 20th to submit your Thriller/Suspense Screenplay:
http://www.thrillersuspensefestival.com

THE DEVIL’S LARCENY, Feature Script Reading, by Howard Fridkin

SYNOPSIS:

NOTE: There is a TWIST in the end of this script. So pay attention!

The story is about two young law students, Steven & Katie, engaged to be married, who are researching the crimes of a dead pedophiliac serial killer for an important law assignment. As they begin delving into the killer’s psyche and the lives of his deceased victims, they begin noticing certain character traits resembling their own and eventually realize the horror that he is the reincarnation of the killer and she is the reincarnation of his last female victim.

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Val Cole
KATIE – Kirsten Nolan
STEVEN – John Goodrich
PROF. ROTHBINE – Gabriel Dumas
DR. BURMAN – Roman Spera
SARAH – Stephanie Schmid
JUNE – Ida Jagaric
DET. DESMOND – David Schaap

Get to know writer Howard Fridkin:

1. What is your FEATURE SCRIPT about?

Elements of the scenario have to be curtailed to prevent spoilers and the setup of a twist ending. The story is about two young law students, Steven & Katie, engaged to be married, who are researching the crimes of a dead pedophiliac serial killer for an important law assignment. As they begin delving into the killer’s psyche and the lives of his deceased victims, they begin noticing certain character traits resembling their own and eventually realize the horror that he is the reincarnation of the killer and she is the reincarnation of his last female victim. Katie, in order to survive Steven’s pursuing obsession to kill her, must plan to murder him first — but who’s going to believe her ludicrous story?

2. Why should your script be made into a film?

This is a highly unique psychological thriller which has never been executed in this type of fashion before. The credible blend of suspense and supernatural events (a la: “Psycho” meets “The Exorcist”) will throw the audience into a new realm of terror and thoroughly surprise them with its complex, yet all accountable twist ending. This makes for a low budget, high concept spec script with enough audience appeal for a commercial success.

3. How long have you been writing?

Since the 70s, but as a hobby and always for fun. I began taking writing seriously in the 90s and have since been aspiring to earn recognition.

4. What movie have you seen the most in your life?

The Good, The Bad And The Ugly (it’s a religion with me).

5. What artists would you love to work with?

Clint Eastwood

6. How many stories/screenplays have you written?

Eight.

7. Ideally, where would you like to be in 5 years?

Love to be earning a living by doing what I love: writing and, eventually, direct.

8. Describe your process; do you have a set routine, method for writing?

I try to write every day, even it if isn’t the main story I am working on. I may watch a film or listen to music that puts me into a certain mood for a story. Depending on the subject matter I’m writing about, I watch specific films to inspire me but then I make sure I go the extra 100 miles to create a new formula for that respective genre.

9. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

I’m an incurable movie addict by nature and have been since I saw my first episode of the original TV show “The Outer Limits” at age 4. I’m also a fervent memorabilia and classic toy collector and have been declared by Joe Clokey (son of “Gumby” creator Art Clokey) “the biggest Gumby collector in the world.”

10. What influenced you to enter the WILDsound Script Contest?

I truly believe that a table read is the next best thing in seeing my script on the big screen — so I entered my new thriller “The Devil’s Larceny.”

11. Any advice or tips you’d like to pass on to other writers?

I hate to use cliches, but when one really works, you have to go with it. Winston Churchill said “Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.” And getting professional feedback on your screenplay doesn’t hurt either.